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toxicvomit
06-01-2005, 04:53 PM
it makes me wonder sometimes
why on horrible nights like this
why is it you that comes to mind
why do i even let you live in my head
why do i constantly relive the things you did
its makes these nights even harder to deal with
knowing that i spend them thinking about you
trying to justify why i let this happen
trying to justify why i didnt know
when we all know what the truth is
it happened because i loved you
i didnt know because i didnt want to
but i guess you win again
one more horrible day
turning into a horrible night
ending with thoughts of you

Captain Bryan
06-01-2005, 06:50 PM
Ouch. :( Your poems always show so much pain.:(

toxicvomit
06-01-2005, 07:00 PM
sorry:(

Captain Bryan
06-01-2005, 07:14 PM
No apologies, it's not your fault. :)

toxicvomit
06-01-2005, 08:28 PM
well it kind of is...cuz im the one writing it.....but whatever

Amirius
06-01-2005, 10:51 PM
Yes, it is your fault, but that's what's so good about it becuase I believe that poetry written without emotion is wasted time and energy.

That being said, another great poem.

Keep it up:)

toxicvomit
06-02-2005, 02:09 AM
awww thank you !!!! you guys are awesome!!!